WK11: The King’s Quest

Once upon a time, there were two vigorous audacious men that worked for a king called Conradh and they were in a land called Porcipiqous. By the way the two strong brave men are called Jumping Joey and Brainy Ben.

Conradh the king heard that there was a treasure in a weird-looking viking statue. Conradh sent the two vigorous audacious men to accomplish his quest in the dark scary forest.

The next day, Jumping Joey and Brainy Ben set off to the dark scary forest. They had to face some traps like hole traps and imperceptible traps but thankgod they’re vigorous and audacious so they overcomed it.

After all the traps, Jumping Joey and Brainy Ben finally found the weird-looking statue and there were 10,000 gold coins in it. The two men brought the gold coins to the king to complete his quest. The king was happy that he gave half his land to them.

11 thoughts on “WK11: The King’s Quest”

  1. Hello Fortune,
    I love your story because you used alliteration,
    I wonder who put all the gold coins there?
    Your sincerely Naglis
    Mrs Boyce’s Class

  2. Hi Fortune.
    I really like the vocabulary you used.
    It reminds me of a book.
    Oh by the way thanks for commenting on our stories.
    Yours sincerely Szymon
    Mrs Boyce’s Class.

  3. Hello Fortune,
    I loved your story because you had great alliteration.
    I wonder who put the statue there and who put the gold there.
    bye for now Marc
    Mrs Boyces class

  4. Hi Fortune
    I like the bit when they found the gold and the king gave half the land to jumping Joey and Brainy Ben
    You are a really good righter and keep up the good work
    From Matthew D
    please checkout my 100 wc

  5. Hi Fortune I love the part when the king gives jumping Joey and brainy Ben half of the kings land


  6. Hi fortune I like your story I like the way that there’s two strong men cool story keep up the good work great story really cool.

  7. Hi Fortune I like your story I like the funny names you gave to the 2 men jumpy joey and brainy Ben lol I hope you make more awesome story’s

    Real flip filip

  8. Hi Fortune,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done. I think it’s one of your best!
    I like the alliteration you used in the men’s names. I’m glad the king rewarded them with half his land.
    Great work this week.
    Thank you again for all the super comments you give all my boys every week. I really appreciate it.
    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


  9. hi fortune your vocabulary is very good and those two men must have been a bit scared to go in there tadhg mrs boyces class

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