WK7: Room swap

As the door slammed,  I knew there was trouble in the air my sister had just come in.  Please don’t tell her but I took her pram and doll.  You may ask why I took them   The story began a year ago when she took my play station four and we kept on stealing from each other.  I would take her diary and she would take my match attacks. We have hidden them from each other until now because now my room have turned into my sisters room and my sisters room has turned into my room and that’s when we swapped room and started again.

7 thoughts on “WK7: Room swap”

  1. Hi BENQ loved your stroy one of the best so far the best part was when sister came in to the room well done great work


  2. Good story Ben. It was funny how you ended up swapping rooms
    Keep up the good work.

    From Ben C

  3. Hi Ben I love the bit when you steel your sisters prom and doll great story keep up the good work


  4. Hi Ben,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    It sounds a little like the rivalry that goes on in my house between brother and sister.
    I think you should wipe the slate clean and start afresh. Now that you and your sister are older you might even get on!
    Good work this week.
    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


  5. Great description! you really capture the tension well when your sister walks into the room. it would be great to see another piece of writing to sequel to this one.

    Good work.

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