The nice man

Once apon a time there was a family.The family were very pore.They could not afford a house.The thing is they lived on the streets.There was a boy a girl and also they’re parents.The only money they got was from people who felt sorry for them.The boy got some money and went to the candy shop.He got a whole bucket of sweets.On the way back some kids tripped him and the sweets went everywhere.The boy started crying but this nice man came over.He picked up his sweets and he gave it back to him and ever since that day the man came and visited him

6 thoughts on “The nice man”

  1. What a heartwarming story Peter. Good deeds are so important – to do something nice for someone without expecting anything in return. Imagine how much nicer the world would be if everyone would think like that. Great writing this week – well done!

  2. I like the part when the man was so nice and the were never poor again.I hope you write more.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

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