Dr. Loren by Ed.

Welcome to a story a , a 2 part story about  mystery .                                                                                                                                                                  Ken was at his aunt , Dr.Loren’s house. He knew only a few things about her : 1. She was a psychiatrist .                                                                                  2. She loved wine .                                                                                              3. She was in the middle of a party.                                                                  4. She loved her pet monkey poodles .                                                    They arrived.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Every body screamed . Dr.Loren was dead  . “Poisoned I suspect.” said one of her posh friends.                                                                                                 I started to investigate . First I wondered how she got poisoned. I saw she had a cup of wine in her hand . I got her friends to smell it and they said It didn’t smell normal .( P.S. the party was in her garden and the print of her falling was in the grass ) I only started to look at it when the it started to rain .   As the weather changed, they faded away.

2 thoughts on “Dr. Loren by Ed.”

  1. Hi Ed, Thanks for commenting on my story last week.
    I wonder why it began to fade away.
    Keep up the good work and please comment on my story.
    Shane C 5th Mrs. Boyces class.

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