It was finally time to go to the zoo. Brian was so excited there were all weird animals like orange Zigzagallygoons and blue  Fizzfazzelers and there was only one normal animal, the saltwater crocodile from Australia and he had a wide  evil grin on his face. Later on when he and his family were going home. But  he had this feeling within him that something bad was going to happen.And then a bold boy broke the crocodile out and his dad screamed like a little girl and collapsed on to the floor. Soon the animal control had to come in and put the crocodile back in its enclosure.

4 thoughts on “A TRIP TO THE ZOO BY BRIAN”

  1. Whew! What a fright that must have been, Brian! I’m glad that the animal control just put the crocodile back into the enclosure – when I read that they were coming, I thought that the poor animal was going to be put down! Thank goodness that didn’t happen! Keep up the GREAT work!

  2. Great story Brian. I love the names you’ve given to those ‘unusual’ animals. I wonder what they look like? I laughed when you said the dad screamed ‘like a little girl’. I’m sure he had every reason to scream. I think I would’ve done the same.

  3. Well done Brian! What an exciting story you’ve written this week.
    I love the names you’ve given the animals – very imaginative.
    I’m glad the animal control managed to put the crocodile back into the enclosure.
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Boyce

  4. Well done Brian, great story! The names you used for the creatures reminds me of a Roald Dahl story.
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock

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