The zoo by Shane

One Sunday afternoon my Mam dad decided to take me to the zoo.So then on the way to the zoo we heard on the news that the biggest crocodile in the zoo had excape.So next thing you we see the crocodile running down the street shooting wide orange fireballs out of its mouth.When we approached the zoo people where running in all directions.One old women even collapsed on my dad “it was hilarious ” Within a matter of minutes the zoo keepers where holding back a two headed tiger that was running through the zoo.THIS WAS THE BEST ZOO EVER !!!!!

6 thoughts on “The zoo by Shane”

  1. Hi Shane,
    That was some adventure you had at the zoo.
    A two headed tiger and a crocodile firing orange fireballs? I think I’d be collapsing like that old woman!
    Great work this week- well done!
    Mrs Boyce
    Cork.

  2. That sounds more like Jurassic Park than a zoo Shane!!! Animals escaping all over the place – scary stuff! Think I’ll just watch my Jurassic Park DVD instead of going to that zoo! Keep up the great work 🙂

  3. Hi Shane.Love the story it was funny.It reminds me off when I got lost in the zoo.How did your parents react to the incident.By Dylan O’C.Mrs Bocyes class.

  4. Hi Shane,
    This story is absolutely brilliant!
    This story reminds me of our first class school tour!
    Did the orange fireballs catch something on fire?
    Seán M
    Mrs Boyces Class

  5. Well done Shane,
    I enjoyed your story this week! Your poor dad, with the old lady on top of him. I’m not sure that the zoo sounds great, I think it sounds a bit scary!!
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock

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