The Adventure by Shane


One hallowe’en night a group of kids snuck into a haunted house. As they gingerly pushed open the creaking door, the dim yellow light flickered. They crept down a long hallway and entered a room with a large bookshelf. One of the boys took a book from the shelf and discovered that the bookshelf moved and they could see a dark corridor. They had a conversation about whether they should go down the corridor. Some wanted to have a look, however they decided it was probably a bad idea. They all ran back up the hallway, out the door and home to tell their parents about their remarkable adventure.


5 thoughts on “The Adventure by Shane”

  1. Hi Shane.
    Great story.
    This reminds me of Scooby-Doo.
    I wonder what else happened.
    Seanmcs ms Boyce’s class.

  2. Hello Shane I liked your story this week. I love Halloween do you?
    Please come back and vvisit my blog and I will visit yours. Shane C 5th Mrs. Boyces Class.

  3. Hi Shane
    Great story I loved reading it.
    I wonder what would happen if they went down the hallway.I wonder what there parents thought about this.
    Great story bye Shane F Mrs boyces class

  4. Yeah, I think that I’d be bolting out that door too. While I’d love to know what was down that corridor, I don’t think I’d be going down there to find out! You’ve used some amazing adjectives here Shane, and the result is a fantastic story. Well done, and keep up the GREAT work!

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